It’s Alive!
Thanks, Julie, for having me on your blog to talk about After Christmas Eve. This is the last stop on my
11-stop blog hop to celebrate the release by MLR Press of my second novel. To
win one of the 10 copies (ebooks) I’m giving away, comment before midnight
tonight (10/25/2013) on any of my posts on the eleven participating blogs. Be
sure to include an email address.
Fan
favorite Philip Potter, a supporting character in Until Thanksgiving, takes center stage in After Christmas Eve. If you read the first book in the holiday
series, you’ll enjoy a few cameo appearances and find out more about Uncle
Philip. If you haven’t, don’t worry. The books can be read in any order. After Christmas Eve is a prequel, set in
Washington DC in 1966. It’s a murder mystery/thriller with a little romance, a
dash of humor, and a liberal sprinkling of gay history.
The
coolest and most surprising thing about writing a novel is the way characters
come to life. Of course, I’d heard writers tell of this kind of thing for decades,
but I really didn’t know what they were talking about. To tell you the truth, I
thought they were just making sh*t up.
In
On Writing, Stephen King says the
story is inside. The writer’s job is to let it out without messing things up
too much. I took his words at face value. I mean, who am I to argue with
Stephen King? But in the first draft of Until
Thanksgiving, the story kept going off in unexpected directions as a result
of something surprising a character said or did. After that, his words made
more sense.
As
I was writing After Christmas Eve,
the characters kept running off with the story, leaving me in piles of
worthless outlines, character sketches, and chapter summaries. Every time I
thought I had a handle on the story, a character would smack me down to let me
know who was really in charge. The road to the end of the story was long and
hard.
I’m
the polar opposite of the cage-fighter type. Getting beat up has never been my
cup of tea, thank you very much. But I’m also a massive control freak.
Rebellions by characters that I created pissed me off, until I learned to go
with the flow.
Here’s the blurb:
As Philip Potter wraps up his last minute shopping on
Christmas Eve, 1966, James Walker, his lover of six years, takes his life.
Unaware of what waits for him at home, Philip drops off gifts to the homeless
shelter, an act of generosity that later makes him a suspect in the murder of a
male prostitute.
Two men drive yellow Continentals. One is a killer, with the
blood of at least six hustlers on his hands. Both men have secrets. And as
Philip is about to discover, James had kept secrets, too. But James wasn’t
trying to frame him for murder…
*This
is the last of eleven stops on the After
Christmas Eve Blog Hop. Excerpts appear in serial form along the hop,
beginning with my post at http://www.shiraanthony.com/?p=3217.
Excerpt #11 of 11
Someone pulled on Philip’s
shoulder, tugging hard. He willed his body to cooperate and rolled onto his
back. Ice slid from his eyebrows, down his cheeks, and into his ear. No wonder
he was so cold.
A gloved hand touched Philip’s
cheek. He heard a deep voice with a Southern drawl, sweet and slow, like honey.
“Sir, can you hear me?”
Philip rubbed his lashes with
shaking fingers and opened his eyes. The flashing lights played across the man
who knelt beside him. “Yes,” he answered.
“Are you all right?” The man
brushed snow and ice from Philip’s coat.
Philip glimpsed the stranger’s
profile in the flickering light. He moved his legs, shook his arms, and moved
his head from side to side. “Honestly, I’m not sure.”
“Can you sit up?” The man
offered his hand.
Philip grabbed it, and with a
lot of help, pulled himself into a sitting position. “Thank you, Mr…?” He
looked up and stopped shivering. His breath caught in his throat. The handsome
man who’d come to his rescue belonged in the movies.
The stranger gathered up the
gifts scattered across the sidewalk and placed them in the tattered shopping
bag. “Beauregard Carter. Want to try
standing up?”
Dazzling blue eyes peered back
at Philip as his shivering resumed. He didn’t know when he’d ever been so cold.
With less help than he’d needed before, Philip rose to his feet and stood
trembling from the cold on quivering knees. “Philip P-p-p-potter,” he barked
the words out as his teeth rattled together. “I d-d-d-d-don’t know w-w-w-what
h-h-h-happ—”
“Your
faggot boyfriend blew his brains out.”
Pain poured over Philip like a
wave of boiling water. “No!” He wailed, pressing his knuckles into his cheeks.
Cold chills racked his body and he would have hit the ground again had Mr.
Carter not jumped to his rescue. Philip clutched the man’s lapels, sobbing and
shivering. “Why?” He kept repeating the word, over and over as strong arms kept
him from falling and steered him away from the curious spectators.
The crowd didn’t seem to notice,
their attention focused on the apartment building’s entrance, watching as
police came and went. Philip stepped away from the man, pulling a white silk
handkerchief from an inside coat pocket. Cold impeded his speech. “I’m so
sorry,” came out as a strangled moan. “Thank
you for helping me, I’m forever in your debt, and don’t let me keep you any
longer,” remained mere thoughts. Philip stared at the ground, fingering the
handkerchief along the edge where his sister had embroidered his name in black
thread.
“I’m not going anywhere, Mr.
Potter, until I know you’re okay and have somewhere to go.” He grasped Philip’s
arm. “You really don’t need to be alone right now.”
Responding to the gentle
pressure pulling him forward, Philip fell into step behind Mr. Carter, the
folded handkerchief slipping from his hand. “Come with me. My apartment is a
block away. Is there someone you can call to come and get you?”
It took Phillip a minute to
realize he’d been asked a question, and another to respond. He was shivering so
much his teeth rattled. The answer came to mind right away, but was frozen in
his head and couldn’t get out. Philip came to a stop to focus on answering his
rescuer’s question. “M-m-m-mary.”
“Good,” the man said, grabbing
Philip’s elbow. “You can call her from my place and warm up while you wait.”
Philip heard the words but had
no sense of their meaning. He focused on lifting one foot and then the other,
placing each back on the icy ground with care to keep from falling. Whether
they walked a block or many miles, Philip couldn’t say. He placed his faith in
the hand that led him through the silent night.
Well Michael, you have well and truly got me needing to read this now!! Good luck with the sales - if I'm not lucky enough to win I'll be getting the book. Love the cover too.
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Littlesuze at hotmail.com
Thanks so much, Suze! I'll be notifying the winners tomorrow. Your chances of winning are pretty good!
ReplyDeleteSounds good.... would love to read it. M8231m77@aol.com
ReplyDeleteThanks, Maggie!
ReplyDeleteThank goodness for the kindness of strangers! I've enjoyed the tour and am looking forward to reading the full story.
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Thanks, Lynette! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much.
DeleteDefinitely need to read this now, I really need to know that Philip gets his HEA after this.
ReplyDeleteThank you for all the excerpts Michael.
Kat
kalimar2010 @ gmail.com
You're very welcome. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
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